Below are our poems and some reflections on this very rich writing genre.
Patrick's Diamante Bunnies Poem can be found here.
Nato by Eve
Stubborn, German shepherd
Barking, licking, sleeping
Bones, meat, rug, laziness
Stealing clothes, running, playing
Cute, guard dog
Dog
By Ryan
Family
Lovely, Friendly
Buying, Shopping, Amazing
Food, Love, Health, Help
Walking and Driving to places, Taking to places, Helping for Homework
Caring, Nice
Parents
Tess - by Daniel
Furry Cute
Rolling, curling into ball, Playing
Park, soccer ball, gold fur, cubed food
Fast, Can do gymnastics
Tiny when young, old now
My dog
π Finn π By Emma
Grey Tabby
Sleeping Sniffing Jumping
Food mess basket comedian
Running Chasing Meowing
Cute Playful
Cat
Trees by Celia
Brown Green
Shaking Helping Glowing
Water Air Paper Leaves
Shimmering Blowing Growing
Tall Amazing
Nature
πSchoolπ by Caitlin
Friendly Fun
Learning Playing Teaching
Maths Inquiry English Friends
Wondering Counting Testing
Colourful Safe
πEducationπ
Mr.Chucky by Oscar
Brown fast
Runs eats sleeps
Grass outside vegetables cage
Plays naps walks
Adorable fluffy
Guinea Pig
By Madeleine K
Snoopy
Black and white, cute
Licking, sniffing, wagging
bones, food, games, sleep
running, barking, chasing
Hairy, girl
dog
Snoopy
Black and white, cute
Licking, sniffing, wagging
bones, food, games, sleep
running, barking, chasing
Hairy, girl
dog
Blog post on poetry by Scarlett
What’s poetry? you may ask, well poetry is a good way to express your feelings or maybe something to do when you’re bored. There are many types of poetry most are complicated like Haiku a form of Japanese poetry or Diamante. There are also simple types like concrete or maybe just a simple acrostic poem.
Here’s an example of a Diamante poem:
Small hairy
Tracking sniffing digging
Spikes desert eggs snow
Waddling sticky tongue
Cute spiky
Mammal
Most poetry has rhyme, rhythm, sound and visual language. You can take moments, memories, events or a second of reality and make a poem out of it!
By Victoria:
Fire and water
Orange yellow
Leaning Wobbling dripping
Candle, wax, flame, light
Hot cold warm
Blowing moving staying still
Candle melt
Diamond Shape Poem by Joel
Cars
Colours, wheels,
Cool-looking, Rims,
Noisy, Gas, Steering, Wheels
Convertibles, Symbols,
Engine, Fast, Types,
Cars
Supergirl (by Rosie)
Bold, Awesome,
Supergirl (by Rosie)
Bold, Awesome,
Saving, Helping, Rescuing,
Supergirl Will Overtake Villain
Destroying, Stopping, Sneaking,
Mean, Evil,
Villain
π Port Douglas π by Georgie
Hot, Fun
Running, Ocean, Walking
Pool, Shops, Restaurants, Ice cream
Happy people, Nice shops, Hot sand
Shopping, Jogging, Swimming
Nice, Big
Queensland
Max by Nick
Green black
Pecks flies talks
Food outside plays get out of cage
Fun cute
Bird
Lilly by Inti
Lilly is crazy as a duck.
She chases bikes like they’re chew toys.
She’s fast like sport car.
She’s fun as a friend.
She’s more playful than any other animal
She’s cuter than a cat
She’s the best dog in the world,
but in the end she's just a dog
Poetry by Josh D.
A poem is a piece of writing to make people emotional and they usually rhyme (they don't have to rhyme)
Here are some examples:
Haiku:
There's some big diamonds
In that big and very dark mine
Get some for me now
Diamante:
Yoda
Old Wrinkly
Walking aching Fighting
Lightsaber Force Starwars Jedi
Meditating Jumping leading
Green amazing
Walking stick
Mustang (by Alexander)
Fast, powerful
Driving, racing, skidding
Colours, speed, engine horsepower
Heart-racing, thrilling, energising
Cool, happy, noisy
Car
Soccer by Simon
Passing Exercise
Kicking Scoring Running
Both use a ball
Slam dunk Hoop Ankle breaking
Swish Trick shot
Basketball
Well, Middles. Luckily for me, I chanced upon this post about my second favourite topic to teach! Guess what the first one might be? I loved reading all your creative pieces. Nice reflection,Scarlett...and so true. On Friday, I was showing my Grade 3/4 students the reflective poem, "In Flanders Fields", http://www.greatwar.co.uk/poems/john-mccrae-in-flanders-fields.htm We talked about how the punctuation was used to create a flow and what the words meant.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the great creativity!
Mrs Yore
I agree with everything you said about Nato, Eve! I didn't know about Diamante poems before reading this, so I've learned something new, thank you!
ReplyDeleteLoved reading these imaginative poems. Loved the way you used such colourful descriptive words. Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteCheers Mrs Bellesini xx :) Miss you all